Feedback

When asking what the strengths of our rough cut were, the feedback we got was:

• The variety of shots
• The continuity of the editing flowed well
• It makes sense
• The shots were good quality

When asked what the weaknesses were:

• More editing needs to be done on the narrative
• The lighting is a bit low
• The attic scene looked quite dark
• wasn't always cut on the beat

What meanings did they gain from watching the video:

• Love story
• Teenage love
• Past
• Memorys

Suggestions:

• use more of the narrative to strengthen the story
• more narrative
• cleaner cuts
• more performance

When encoding our video ie: making our storyboard we encoded certain messages and themes to our narrative, ie: a teenage lovestory. from the feedback we recieved we can see our audience's easily decoded these messages within our video.